It was another cold winter evening. A little girl sat shuddering on the front porch. Daddy’s going to be mad.. she thought. He made her promise she’d wait inside. “You don’t want to get a cold do you? Then who eats all the ice cream?”. But she hated waiting inside, all alone. The excitement tingled in her veins. SHE WAS FINALLY GETTING HER BIKE!!!! Daddy never went back on his word, she knew. He always came through. Always.
The sound of the front door creaking woke her up. She’d fallen asleep waiting. With what could only be the ‘widest grin ever’ on her face, she ran out to greet him. “Daddy! daddy!”, she screamed all the way there. He stood in the drive way, next to the prettiest pink bike with rainbow ribbons and a shiny bell . It even had a pink basket with the little daisies she loved. She stood there speechless, staring at her brand new bike with utter amazement. “Do you want to go for a ride Princess?”, he asked knowingly. Her eager eyes gave her away.
He sat there, tired, after a hard days work. All the pain was non-existent when he was watching her. After hours of ‘going for one last round in the yard’, he finally got her to put the bike away. He carried her back to her room and tucked her into bed like every other night. Five minutes into the bed-time story and she was sound asleep. At last he retired to his own bed and turned the lights out, preparing himself for another day. Another day of picking trash and sweeping floors. He would do anything to provide for her.
What they had, though it was not much, it was enough. In a world full of people who spent their lives counting dollars, they lived theirs counting stars.
Inspired by the song – Counting Stars by One Republic.
© Abirami
This is so beautiful! You amaze me with something new. Always. 🙂
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Aww thank you 🙂 I am so glad you liked it. You’re one of the readers I’m always grateful for.
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The feeling’s mutual. 🙂
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this is absolutely amazing
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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beautiful imagery
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Thank you. 🙂
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this was beautiful, it somehow makes me feel a little more appreciative of everyday things
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I’m so glad you like it 🙂
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The ending almost made me cry. I’m not kidding. This is just wow.
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Why, thank you! 🙂
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Oh my goodness that was the most beautiful thing I’ve ever read!!!!!! Well done 😍😍😍😍
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You just made my day! 😀 thank you for that!
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You’re very welcome 🙂 thanks for the great post!!!
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🙂 check out my other posts in fiction if you’re interested! Thank you once again.
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Will do 🙂
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Good story 🙂 the ending really put the cherry on top.
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Thank you 🙂 I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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//going for one last round in the yard
I just don’t know why this mattered more than every other line. Maybe I’ve did that a lot.
Like an Arrow, Abirami!
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It makes me so happy that you can relate! 🙂 thank you for reading.
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Thank You for writing!
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I have nominated you for the Liebster Award 2017. Check it here: https://iamots.wordpress.com/2017/07/24/winning-the-liebster-award-2017/
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Thank you so much 🙂
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That is so beautiful, a moving piece! Absolutely beautiful!
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🙂 thank you! It means a lot
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Ok! Abirami.. I’d like to talk to you about a very short screenwriting project. I want you to write for that! Something like a flash fiction..
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I’d love to hear about it 🙂 Mail me if you’d like at abiramigiri1998@gmail.com
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Mailed!
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Replied 😀
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MAybe, I’m typing out a longer message!😂
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Love this and have always loved the song that inspired it!
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Thank you 🙂
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Awesome! And you know what!? I was listening to Counting Stars rn while reading this post! Its on my top 5 playlist! Love d post as well as the song❤
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Thank you 🙂 I’m glad you liked it
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What a beautiful way to describe the love a father has for his daughter.
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Thank you 🙂
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Oh my goodness, that is so sweet!
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Thank you 🙂
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wow i actually FELT the ending. this is how i kinda interpreted it. im obsessed
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Thank you for reading 😀 I know it’s a bit of a cliche but I love that line from the song and this is my interpretation of it 🙂
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