“What if she says no?” he thought, as he stood on one knee in front of the girl of his dreams.
It was going to be a simple answer.
Yes or no.
But, he seriously doubted his ability to process any piece of information as of then. At intense moments, the thin line between flying and falling gets blurry. The fear of the latter always trumps the prospects of hope for the former.
She always spoke about love being the only thing that transcended space and time. He laid down his faith on that very love and hoped it was enough. They’ve been in love for as long as he remembered. What are these silly doubts then? He always trusted her. Why not now? Even though none of it made any sense, he still couldn’t shake the fear. He wondered how silly he must look. A grown man trembling with fear. Perhaps she’ll take me for a coward. After what felt like ages she finally looked like she was about to say something.. that was when the trembling got worse.
It took him long enough to realize he wasn’t really trembling. He was being woken up.
“Up sleepy head! You promised me some brunch, remember?”
Seven years of marriage and he still couldn’t believe she’d said yes.
© Abirami
And you have captured a guy’s thought in such a perfect way. If this ever happens to me, I am it is going the exactly word by word the same.
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Haha 😀 Thanks man!
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Wow..beautiful! 🙂
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You are too kind. 🙂
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or maybe you’ve written it well 😀
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😛 ah still kind
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alright then 😉
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It’s a sweet story! 🙂
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Haha 😀 Thank you for checking it out.
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Oh my god that’s so cute
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Thanks 😀
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Loved it! Mesmerizing and beautiful.
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Glad you liked it 🙂 thank you!
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That’s beautiful
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Absolutely stunning… Looks like a piece of someone’s life 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂 I intended it to sound as real as possible.
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Yes… It actually sounds real…
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I’m generally not a fan of romantic ramblings (the effect of too much wattpad :P), but this one made me smile.
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Haha! Been there. And thank you so much 🙂
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Great post but I knew that even before I read it. 🙂
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You are too kind 🙂 thank you!
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That I am. 🙂
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Awesome 🙂
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Thank you. 🙂 I appreciate it
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Loved it !!!
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Haha. I have already checked out other posts and liked them. 🙂
You expression of thought is really good! Glad I stumbled upon your post. Will follow your other posts as well 🙂
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I just noticed! Haha. Thank you so much. 🙂 this means a lot.
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Ha ha you are welcome 🙂
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I’m all smiles!!!!! Never expected such an end😁
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Haha 😀 that was the goal!
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Such a sweet story, I’m so glad it worked out for him ☺️
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Haha! 😀 thank you for reading 🙂
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Very cute ☺️
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Thank you:)
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Love it!
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Thank you for the kind words 🙂
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Such a sweet story. ❤
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I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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Aww, thank you for putting a big smile on my face. Sweet read.
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I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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This is literally the cutest thing ever ❤❤
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Thank you 🙂
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Looks like love can traverse more than space and time.
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Haha 😀 I hope you enjoyed it!
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That’s really cute!😎🤗
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Thank you so much!! 🙂
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Would love to have your review sometime😇
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I will check it out 🙂
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Beautiful
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That’s amazing tale:)
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Welcome 🙂
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Thank you for sharing 🙂
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